Monday, November 14, 2016

Chapter 1: A Town of Evil



Far to the north of Oklahoma City, past Guthrie, past Perry, and at an even higher latitude than Ponca City—but still not in Kansas—there was a town.  A town of mystery and deceit.  A town of gloom and desperation.  A town containing a horror great enough to drive even the sanest person mad.  A despicable, deplorable, ghastly horror so incredible that not even the most veteran police officer in Oklahoma would have supposed it to be possible.  It could be found here, right off I-35 in a town best known as a gas stop for empty Kansas tanks.
The town was called Blackwell—a fitting name, if there ever was one.  Both parts of it stood for something.  Black stood for darkness, evil, deceit, terror, and all manner of ghastliness.  Well stood for cesspool, as all those aforementioned qualities ran together here in this little community.  Blackwell, Oklahoma: population, 7,092.  Blackwell, Oklahoma: America’s Hometown.  Blackwell, Oklahoma—metropolis of terror.
Oh, you never would’ve known it, if, by some chance, you’d strayed any farther than the Braum’s, the gas stations, and the hotels right off the Interstate.  You wouldn’t have suspected it, motoring down Highway 11, watching some fields flick past the window and wondering when you’d ever hit the town.  You wouldn’t have guessed it had you seen the Dollar General, the Conoco, the Pizza Hut, the grocery store, and the other businesses off the town’s busiest street.  Even if, for some unknown reason, you’d started exploring, chances are you still wouldn’t have noticed it.  Some towns are awful for their populations at large.  You know.  The ones whose jails are always full, the ones whose police officers are viewed as enemies by a majority of the community, the ones whose neighborhoods aren’t walkable.  Their problems don’t all stem from one source; they stem from many different ones, all working together to make the district a worse place to live.  That’s the easy type of evil to spot.
What’s hard to detect is the type that’s caused by one person.  London had a particularly famous example back in the 1890s—Jack the Ripper, that mysterious villain that roamed the city, committing brutally horrible murders.  Those crimes, so shocking in their nature, stood out from the rest as clearly the work of the same individual.  Yet Jack only committed six murders.  That barely dented the population of England’s largest city, and tourists weren’t turning up dead bodies at their door every night.  If you were just passing through London, you might not notice, but if you lived there, you’d feel it.  The abject terror of walking through the streets, wondering if that man in the coat walking past you bears a knife, ready to follow you into some dark alley and end it all—
But London’s not that great an example.  It was a huge town, full of crooks, bandits, and villains.  How else did Scotland Yard establish its reputation?  Blackwell, on the other hand, was a little town of decent, hard-working folks just seeking to earn a living.  It never had crime trouble—at least, not until lately.  Even now that it did, most of the crimes weren’t that severe.  No one had gotten killed, or even assaulted.  It was more a series of burglaries, robberies, and arson that had the police scratching their heads, trying to explain the cause.
Ah, the cause.  That was the source of the horror for the town.  Most people were unaware of it; their lack of fear did nothing to erase the threat.  They saw it every day but didn’t realize what it was, and so they welcomed it into the community, unaware of the trouble they were asking for.  A few were aware of it, but these were powerless to do anything about it.  They were like the passengers on the Titanic, knowing the boat was about to sink and unable to get off.  But even if they’d been able to tell the rest of the town what was going on, their story wouldn’t have been believed.  Far from being vilified, the cause was made a hero, leading to an ever-worsening cycle of chaos and destruction.  All who met him fell under his spell in one of two ways.  Either they saw him for the man he pretended to be, and applauded him, or they saw him for the man who really was, and were controlled by him.  Everyone in town fell into one of these two categories.
      Except for one resident.  And that’s who this story is about.

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